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And Me (Draft 1)

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

0 posted 2008-08-28 07:32 PM

Alright guys, here's the deal: I'm writing poems for my creative writing class and they will all be entitled And Me and then I will list the draft Number, what I need you all to do (if you would be so kind) is to tell me your favorite one. Please and thank you!

-Kate

And Me (Draft 1)

And me
The greying color
Of the sea before the storm
And he
The bursting bubbles
Of the shrouded water world
And me
The ribboned hair
Of the foam
That surfs to shore
And he
The playful breezes
That run forever more
And me
The calming sound
Of the burble in the Locker
And he
Is but the image
Of the light that can not
Touch her
And me
A single wave
That touches every meaning
And he
My fellow droplets
That have a way with seeing
And me . . .

"Lucy: I think you are the most selfish person on the planet. George: Well that's just silly. Have you met everyone on the planet?"

[This message has been edited by RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed (08-29-2008 10:54 PM).]

WaterFairy103
Member

since 2006-05-31

Posts 196

1 posted 2008-08-28 10:08 PM

So far, this is my fave! = ] Can't wait to read more, love.

- K

Do the day, and let the day do you. - S. King

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