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Octave
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since 2008-07-29
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Highlands, Scotland.

0 posted 2008-08-26 03:41 PM



Mirror

When I look into
The slickened glass of all
I see my hatred staring back
The silvered tears that fall

When I look into
All the world around
I set foot on trodden dirt
And onto road I’m bound

When I look into
Past, future and this day
I see only beaded blisters
Growing debts I’m due to pay

When I look into
The old scars and the new
That map my tender skin
Stark red like drops of dew

When I look into
The hopeless, endless cave
I feel a sense of relief as
A path of punishment is pave

When I look into
My own cold, bitter eyes
I only see myself staring back
My tears, my fears, my lies

When I look into
A life of twisted thorns
That entwine my sooty heart
Rises does the bloodied dawn

When I look into
The vein of loss and plea
It’s then I stumble on weary feet
And find the urge to flee

When I stand upon my chains
That tie me to my being
I open twisted lashes
And then I begin seeing

Its as my tired pupils
Find the light in dark
I turn my self to mirror
And see a portrait more than stark

When I look into
A life marked with filth
It’s then I can accept it
And I can begin to fix myself

As per usual, thanks for taking the time to read my work, and comment. =]

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