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Dark Star
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Lost in your eyes

0 posted 2008-08-22 08:11 PM






The sweet taste of your love
tingles within my veins ever so gentile
your the candle that brightens my heart
While I think of you,
my love

xoxo-

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1 posted 2008-08-22 09:07 PM


this is so soft and sweet really very nice
Earl Robertson
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2 posted 2008-08-22 10:13 PM


yeah that's the word for it, soft. Not exactly warm but, hey I like it!

Be who you are
And say what you feel
'Cause those who mind don't matter
And those who matter don't mind
-Dr Suess

BeyaK
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3 posted 2008-08-23 11:37 AM


soft and sweet poem... but love reading it

~~*K. B.*~~

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4 posted 2008-08-23 11:51 AM


short and sweet...to say it simply.

~*Julianna*~

"You don't know me...but I know you. That's all that matters right now... Mr.Rainey!" - Secret Window

Dark Star
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Lost in your eyes
5 posted 2008-08-26 07:42 PM


thnx everyone for your thoughtful remarks about my poem


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