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I am the arch angel
Member

since 2008-02-02

Posts 167
nowhere,illinois,USA

0 posted 2008-08-25 11:15 PM

That day tore me apart
when i heard you were gone i felt sick
you may be out of my life but not out of my heart
i miss you and can't even begin to quit

If only i could hear your voice one last time
Life is oh so short and oh so scary
i'd give anything to see you here and fine
please grant my wish, litte fairy

I think of you everyday
I only hope your proud
i've used everything you had to say
i see your face in the clouds

my biggest hero, my biggest fan
you taught me how you showed me why
just like you showed me what it takes to be a man
I wish you were here so i didnt have to cry

even though your gone
Just remember use your pawns
your still here just not shown;just like an unseen fawn
I love you,i miss you, every day, from dusk till dawn......

i love you dad, you'll be forever in my heart and memories.

If its at its worst don't stop believing, because I'm right here and I'm not leaving

[This message has been edited by I am the arch angel (08-26-2008 08:44 AM).]

shattered-smiles
Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 247
inside the shadows

1 posted 2008-08-25 11:19 PM

Keagan... this poem is really good. I'm crying right now! I know you miss your dad, but I'll always be here for you. -Hugs-

TJ

So cut me into pieces and tape me into something beautiful...

RevengeIsMine
Senior Member

since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

2 posted 2008-08-25 11:33 PM

Oh keagan...
Tears are rolling down my face... and i don't really know what to say.. But how much i'm always going to be here for u..

Everything will be okay you know..
I'm not going to let anything go wrong..

BeyaK
Member

since 2008-08-07

Posts 126
Philippines

3 posted 2008-08-26 12:48 PM

such a nice one to read... touching and sad but i sure do love the emotion on this piece. nice one indeed

~~*K. B.*~~

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

4 posted 2008-08-26 07:37 AM

Dang it Keagan!! Your way to good at writing.. I'm crying now... Geez.. -laughs to himself-

I know you miss your dad and you always will... I just hope you can find happiness and live the life you want. =]

"Only in darkness can we see the stars.
And only there is it darkest before the dawn."

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

5 posted 2008-08-26 08:25 PM

Crying over here! This is a beautiful poem and there is lots of emotion put into it. Fantastic job and just remember to hang in there. Always here,

{~~*~~} (library)

"You are not loyal enough to eat my orange jelly beans....#}
{~Emily~}

Dark Star
Member

since 2008-02-20

Posts 392
Lost in your eyes

6 posted 2008-08-27 03:01 PM

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