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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

0 posted 2008-08-17 10:49 AM

I Saw the World Burn

The day the world set fire
No one knew to burn
The sins they had committed
Or they would have their turn

That charred was just a word
That reality said was black
That pain was more than hurting
It was a torture rack

But one thing we all knew
The good would feel no pain
The flames just wouldn’t dare
To try to lick in vain

They simply wouldn’t burn
Their feet would be too high
Like angles in the heavens
The righteous in the sky

And don’t we have this wish
To be above the world
And not be in such peril
As such was never heard

And so the answer’s simple
Though execution rarely is
The only thing that we must do
Is follow and be His

"Lucy: I think you are the most selfish person on the planet. George: Well that's just silly. Have you met everyone on the planet?"

Gasken
Junior Member

since 2008-07-12

Posts 20
Cebu, Philippines

1 posted 2008-08-17 10:14 PM

-This is a reply for the message that you had in my poem entitled CRY-

Thanx Renaissance.. Hope i can make another poem. But a poem that is a happy to read. Hehe..

And.. I'm also planning to make a poem or a song to the girl that I loved the most. Maybe you can help me? Hehe.. U can suggest to me a title for a poem or song..

I just want her to be happy without expecting a happiness from her in return.. But it's ok with me.. As long as i can see her sweet smile.. After all, love is unconditional, right?

Gasken
Junior Member

since 2008-07-12

Posts 20
Cebu, Philippines

2 posted 2008-08-17 10:19 PM

ohh i forgot to give a message to your poem.. Hehe.. Well, for me, your poem was so nice and had a good lesson to be kept.. Great write.. (--,)

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

3 posted 2008-08-17 11:45 PM

ohhh Kate Darling

I loved this!!! its so good to read your poems again althow I havent had time to respond to most of them I have read them all.. I def. loved this one a lot! you are a really talented writer you know

Krysti

RevengeIsMine
Senior Member

since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

4 posted 2008-08-18 04:15 AM

Kate you own about a million pairs of my socks already but now ur the proud owner of a million and one... amazing work.

Jess xx

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

5 posted 2008-08-18 11:06 AM

Thanks to you all. You make my day every time. And Jess, about those socks, you can't have them back, they are the only testiment to my guienous that I have. HAhaha. Love you all and to Gasken, I would love to help you out. drop me a note or something.

-Kate

"Lucy: I think you are the most selfish person on the planet. George: Well that's just silly. Have you met everyone on the planet?"

BeyaK
Member

since 2008-08-07

Posts 126
Philippines

6 posted 2008-08-18 12:11 PM

kate, this is a nice piece. different, but nice one to read.

~~*Kaye B.*~~

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

7 posted 2008-08-18 09:28 PM

You can add my socks to your collection! Absolutely stunning!

Be who you are
And say what you feel
'Cause those who mind don't matter
And those who matter don't mind
-Dr Suess

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