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Teen Poetry #8

For The First Time

HersheyKiss
Member

since 2008-06-02

Posts 137
New Jersey

0 posted 2008-08-16 12:11 PM

Idk not my usual. I tried something different let me know what you think. Its pretty bad.

For The First Time:

This is only the beginning
To a new love
A new child
A new friend

I will hold you in my arms
Keep you safe from all harm
Love you with no exception
Show you the right direction

I dream of the day
When I can see your face
And I bet your smile
Will make my heart race
For the first time

I never met you before
But I already love you
I already know you
I can feel you within me always

You fill me with joy
That no other person can feel
I am so lucky to have you
And so anxious to meet you
For the first time

When I can call you
My love
My friend
My child

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

1 posted 2008-08-16 03:10 AM

This is remarkable. I don't think it's bad the tiniest bit, and sometimes it's good to try new things. I really love this. And yet it makes me feel completly different. Love the poem. Library for sure.

{~~*~~}

"You are not loyal enough to eat my orange jelly beans....#}
{~Emily~}

RevengeIsMine
Senior Member

since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

2 posted 2008-08-16 03:12 AM

It's good i like it..

BeyaK
Member

since 2008-08-07

Posts 126
Philippines

3 posted 2008-08-16 10:37 AM

i like reading this one... nice!

~~*Kaye B.*~~

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

4 posted 2008-08-22 10:56 AM

Very nice. This poem made me feel good and I realy enjoyed it. (warm poems arn't too common around here)
Library

Be who you are
And say what you feel
'Cause those who mind don't matter
And those who matter don't mind
-Dr Suess

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