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Dark Star
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Lost in your eyes

0 posted 2008-02-20 07:43 PM



Twinkling in the Night

Stars are twinkling
in the dark cold air sky
in the dead of night


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XxForever.BrokenxX
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1 posted 2008-02-20 08:22 PM


short but nice all the same. It gave me a peacefull feeling. and Welcome to pip!! hope to see more

FoReVeR.BrOkEn

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2 posted 2008-02-20 11:06 PM


very nicee first post... Haiku's are a grat form of poetry!!! hope to read more Welcome to Passions!!
Krysti

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3 posted 2008-02-21 04:32 PM


Welcome to pip!

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4 posted 2008-02-21 05:16 PM


Welcome to PIP!! haiku's arent my favorite type or poetry but its still poetry right? lol great work!!!

~Zach~

Dark Star
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Lost in your eyes
5 posted 2008-02-21 06:13 PM


Forever Broken-

Thnx

Dark Star
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6 posted 2008-02-21 06:13 PM


Hunni-

I'm looking forward myself to start

Dark Star
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7 posted 2008-02-21 06:14 PM


artic-

thx

Dark Star
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8 posted 2008-02-21 06:14 PM


Falling rain

Haikus are fun and easy, sometimes

starpower
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9 posted 2008-03-18 05:57 PM


hey that was good

You can send me an email,
Thanks

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10 posted 2008-03-18 06:00 PM


LIKED IT. WELCOME TO PIP
Dark Star
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11 posted 2008-08-22 08:03 PM


thnx both of you

xoxox-Star

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