Teen Poetry #8 |
Easy Mending |
RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
Easy Mending I couldn’t believe I stood there On the edge of Misery’s Gulf Prepared to dive, to leap right off Into my soul’s demise Strong arms pulled me back Invisible to me The hand I held I would have pulled It took a while see My lessons hard, and tempting From myself I even saw The pull of this delicious death The poison of the soul But understanding, the healing tool The thing that helps the meek Was my grandest greatest help It made me strong when weak I knew what I must do Though the path scared me to death I finally tired and preserved And survived the test "Lucy: I think you are the most selfish person on the planet. George: Well that's just silly. Have you met everyone on the planet?" |
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Assassin_of_Verse Member
since 2007-10-23
Posts 330that So Cal |
Hmm... I liked your choice of words. "Gulf of Misery" That hooked me. ^^ Overall though, it was okay... Not bad, not great, but good. Thanks for sharing Kate! BTW, where did you get your signature? There is power in the pen. |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
it was a quote from a moive i saw. "Lucy: I think you are the most selfish person on the planet. George: Well that's just silly. Have you met everyone on the planet?" |
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Assassin_of_Verse Member
since 2007-10-23
Posts 330that So Cal |
What movie was it? I'm curious cuz it seems like I've heard it before. There is power in the pen. |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
two weeks notice i think, it was on like tnt or usa or lifetime, i don't know, i watch a lot of movies. -KAte "Lucy: I think you are the most selfish person on the planet. George: Well that's just silly. Have you met everyone on the planet?" |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
No NOOO! What do you mean I didn't RESPOND TO THIS!?!? This is So great! Actualy I want to put it to music. Library Be who you are |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
please do. I would love that, you have my permission frank. -Kate "Lucy: I think you are the most selfish person on the planet. George: Well that's just silly. Have you met everyone on the planet?" |
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