Teen Poetry #8 |
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Jakey's Lullaby |
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HersheyKiss Member
since 2008-06-02
Posts 137New Jersey |
Hey I'm back sorry it's been awhile so much stuff going on at home I can't deal with it all and get on here to post and take care of Jake. Here's a new poem I wrote the other day. Hush little Jakey, Don't you cry, Your mommy's not here, And you don't know why, It's hard to explain, When you're five years old, But I'm sure one day, That you will be told, Now shush little Jakey, It will be alright, It's a tough battle, But we've won this fight, Your mommy is not here, But we're not to blame, You see daddy was playing, A sick and twisted game, Now hush little Jakey, Just close your eyes, Forget about daddy, And his awful lies. And as you sleep Jakey, Promise me one thing, That you will never ever, Turn out like him. |
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hunnie_girl![]() ![]()
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
awee hunn this was soo sad poor jake and you too.. sorrie you have to deal with all this pain Krysti |
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Just.Another.Falling.Star Member
since 2008-05-08
Posts 422Canada |
really good poem/song. it was so sad and touching i almost cried. great job once again. still prayin' for ya, hang in there. someday everything wil work out just as God had planned. library ~*Julianna*~ |
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BeyaK Member
since 2008-08-07
Posts 126Philippines |
hope things will turn out okay... touching poem... Take care |
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RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia |
This Is Amazing Danielle.. I love your work hunni.. My heart and hugs too you at this sad time... Love and kisses for you and Jake... Jess xoxoxox |
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
You had me crying at the end. Library. {~~*~~} "You are not loyal enough to eat my orange jelly beans....#} |
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Falling rain![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
I hope you and Jake are doing better.. Love your work.. Hugs to both of you. ~Zach~ "Only in darkness can we see the stars. |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
Best of luck. I know that doesn't cut it but...truly if there's anything I can do, if you need to talk or or ANYthing I'm here. Hope you're doing better at least. ps Loved the poem. Be who you are |
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