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HersheyKiss
Member

since 2008-06-02

Posts 137
New Jersey

0 posted 2008-08-11 08:25 PM

Hey I'm back sorry it's been awhile so much stuff going on at home I can't deal with it all and get on here to post and take care of Jake. Here's a new poem I wrote the other day.

Hush little Jakey,
Don't you cry,
Your mommy's not here,
And you don't know why,

It's hard to explain,
When you're five years old,
But I'm sure one day,
That you will be told,

Now shush little Jakey,
It will be alright,
It's a tough battle,
But we've won this fight,

Your mommy is not here,
But we're not to blame,
You see daddy was playing,
A sick and twisted game,

Now hush little Jakey,
Just close your eyes,
Forget about daddy,
And his awful lies.

And as you sleep Jakey,
Promise me one thing,
That you will never ever,
Turn out like him.

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

1 posted 2008-08-12 03:30 AM

awee hunn this was soo sad poor jake and you too.. sorrie you have to deal with all this pain
Krysti

Just.Another.Falling.Star
Member

since 2008-05-08

Posts 422
Canada

2 posted 2008-08-12 10:12 AM

really good poem/song. it was so sad and touching i almost cried. great job once again. still prayin' for ya, hang in there. someday everything wil work out just as God had planned.

library

~*Julianna*~

"You don't know me...but I know you. That's all that matters right now... Mr.Rainey!" - Secret Window

BeyaK
Member

since 2008-08-07

Posts 126
Philippines

3 posted 2008-08-12 01:24 PM

hope things will turn out okay... touching poem... Take care

RevengeIsMine
Senior Member

since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

4 posted 2008-08-13 09:46 PM

This Is Amazing Danielle.. I love your work hunni..

My heart and hugs too you at this sad time...

Love and kisses for you and Jake...

Jess

xoxoxox

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

5 posted 2008-08-16 03:28 AM

You had me crying at the end. Library.

{~~*~~}

"You are not loyal enough to eat my orange jelly beans....#}
{~Emily~}

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

6 posted 2008-08-21 06:58 PM

I hope you and Jake are doing better..

Love your work..

Hugs to both of you.

~Zach~

"Only in darkness can we see the stars.
And only there is it darkest before the dawn."

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

7 posted 2008-08-21 09:17 PM

Best of luck. I know that doesn't cut it but...truly if there's anything I can do, if you need to talk or or ANYthing I'm here.

Hope you're doing better at least.

ps Loved the poem.

Be who you are
And say what you feel
'Cause those who mind don't matter
And those who matter don't mind
-Dr Suess

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