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Cold Goodbye
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Cold Goodbye |
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BeyaK Member
since 2008-08-07
Posts 126Philippines |
COLD GOODBYE Mysterious eyes as dark as the starless night a soft gentle touch makes my tears out of sight but still I can feel you a bit somehow cold you never seem to know how my emotions unfold it's like I'm seated beside a cold stone hard to please and hard to mold I can still feel myself all alone We've been together but some meters apart have you even noticed me? you know my name from the start but I guess that's how it ended simple and yet that fast would you care to look back at me? let me just ask you, "have you felt it at last?" or would you like me to help you find the way towards my heart but you choose to walk away leaving me all torn apart how could you be so cold and so unkind? did you even care about me? I can leave everything behind I don't know what I am to you your feelings you just try to hide I just only wanted you to be true don't pretend to be blind if you can just tell me and don't let me suffer I can take those words just try not to stutter say them slowly say them simply short just say those words to me as a gentle goodbye of sort. ~~*Kaye B.*~~ |
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
hmm...interesting {~~*~~} "You are not loyal enough to eat my orange jelly beans....#} |
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Just.Another.Falling.Star Member
since 2008-05-08
Posts 422Canada |
really great write. different, gut still good. welcom to pip! ~*Julianna*~ |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
enjoyed  Krysti |
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BeyaK Member
since 2008-08-07
Posts 126Philippines |
thanks emily, julianna, and krysti ... i'll try posting some next time... looking forward to read some of your pieces as well. take care ~~*Kaye B.*~~ |
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