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maddorani
Member

since 2007-11-18

Posts 423
houston,tx

0 posted 2008-08-05 10:15 AM

I am getting sadder  and sadder
My life is getting blacker and blacker
Theres no joy around me
The blackness  covers my heart
Wherever I go I am only surrounded by darkness
Once my life was bright
But it got taken away
Once I was happy
But not anymore
All the darkness aroma by me
No joy for me
No colors
All I see is darkness
Sometimes it seems like I got color blinded
Instead of the white clouds I see  the dark gray clouds
Instead of seeing the beautiful birds all I see are black crows
Instead Of seeing the green leaves all I see are burnt fall leaves
What happened to the life that I once enjoyed
What did I do wrong
So many regrets and mistakes
Which took my life away
Sometimes I wonder if my life will become bright again
Or it will be surrounded by darkness forever
I cant no longer hold the pain that I have in my heart
It is making me sadder and sadder
And my life is getting blacker and blacker
All I cry is the tears of pain
Only the tears of pain
All I get reminded of is my bad memories
How come I am so lonely
So lonely that I stand out from everyone
Everyday I am going insane
Because there is no one for me
It hurts me so much
That I cant do anything about it
But for now once I gave love and helped people
But now I have hatred inside of me
I am no longer the happy me
Now  I have found out that life is unfair
Giving me sorrows
Giving me the pain
Sometimes its better if the truth was hidden
And the lies are told
Because the truth hurts more  than anything else in the world
Giving me a wound in my heart
What did I get in return
In return I got pain
In return I got tears
Which u cant even count
Also I got hurt
And nothing else
All I know is that this darkness will stay with me
No matter how far I go
I will always be surrounded  by it
I am getting sadder and sadder
My life is getting blacker and blacker
And I am getting duller and duller
With this misery and sorrow
I am so lonely
Sometimes I wish there was a person by my side
But it just cant be helped can it
I am always going to be in the doom of darkness
I am getting sadder and sadder
My life is getting blacker and blacker
BYYYY MEEEE

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

1 posted 2008-08-06 07:48 PM

I know exacally what u mean. For a title i would say something like Supressed in These Darkend Tears or A Darkend World...something to fit with the colourless world we try not to drownd in. Great poem btw

{~~*~~}

"You are not loyal enough to eat my orange jelly beans!...'cuase dat's just how I roll.."
{~Emily~}

maddorani
Member

since 2007-11-18

Posts 423
houston,tx

2 posted 2008-08-06 09:47 PM

thanks alot hehe u should read the other ones that i posted up

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