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MY DREAMS HAVE SHATTERED
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MY DREAMS HAVE SHATTERED |
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maddorani Member
since 2007-11-18
Posts 423houston,tx |
My dreams have shattered One by one Piece by piece Slowly making a pile fo glass Slowly cutting my skin And making the blood glitter by the sun The huge pile of glass which is getting a colorful shade Slowly I am walking on the glass of my shattered dreams And bringing tears to my eyes Making them turn red While my feet are covered in blood Which is giving me the pain Which hurts me the most And the hot sun outside of the window Is making the blood sparkle I thought one day all of my dreams would coem true Because all I had was my thoughts feelings and dreams When I felt so lonely Those were the things I believed in When I had nothing But still I don’t have anything with me I only have the life of pain I only have the glass of my shatterd dreams Now I am in the depth of loneliness And no one to talk to No one that could understand me My dreams have shattered bringing darkness into my life BYYY MEEEE |
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
"My dreams have shattered One by one Piece by piece Slowly making a pile fo glass Slowly cutting my skin And making the blood glitter by the sun" ____________________________________________ Empty, like you've run out of gas half way up a hill and you suddenly start tumbling back down to where u just escaped from. Like there's no hope, no point in dreaming. But there is always someone to talk to, someone who is willing to push you up that hill just to see you smile again. Even when it feels like everything is falling apart --if it feels like you're one step away from letting go, all you have to do is grab hold of something and pull yourself forward. Because you'd be surprised to see that it wasn't people u loved putting up the walls, but you yourself. Im not entierly sure how much sense that makes to you 'cause im a little confused about what im saying but the point is that no matter what, don't give up. It doesn't matter how far down u already feel 'cause even if it doesn't seem like it, things like this lead all the way down to the end. Sorry for writing so much..Half of it probably doesn't make sense so I dont' mind if u skip over it. haha. Again, I know how you feel and great writing. {~~*~~} "You are not loyal enough to eat my orange jelly beans!...'cuase dat's just how I roll.." {~Emily~} |
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maddorani Member
since 2007-11-18
Posts 423houston,tx |
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