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Teen Poetry #8

not finished but more to come

Clockwork_Orange
Senior Member

since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

0 posted 2008-07-20 07:08 PM

the night is growing lonely
just like myself
sitting on a curb alone
these street lights melt
this city seems so cold
and it never sleeps
just a endless hunger
like an evil beast

i stand up from this curb
and i look around
staring through these stained red eyes
im so burnt out

how could the world
become this cold
so dead to everyone else
is there no hope
which way is the right way out
we'll never know
we can only keep walking
on this one way road

[This message has been edited by Clockwork_Orange (07-20-2008 08:59 PM).]

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

1 posted 2008-07-20 09:11 PM

i don't know how but you always say things in a way i never knew they could be said. loved it.

-Kate

"Lucy: I think you are the most selfish person on the planet. George: Well that's just silly. Have you met everyone on the planet?"

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

2 posted 2008-07-21 11:44 AM

Clockwork.. .to my suprize your talent sometimes surpases mine and im amazed and stunned by it..

... You really know how to connect to the reader and really understand the emotion behind your words.. Great job Clockwork!!

((Library))

~Zach~

"Only in darkness can we see the stars.
And only there is it darkest before the dawn."

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