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Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

0 posted 2008-07-20 11:00 AM

Letting go

Another day goes by.
Another tear rolls down my face.
Thinking just of you...
Trying to walk at an even pace.

Holding myself together
When im falling all apart.
Trying to get over this.
Trying to redo from the start.

I went to your funeral..
And didn't shead a tear
But watching them lower you down.
Triggered my deepest fear.

I never wanted to let go.
And i'll never forget your face.
You loved me from the start.
And it left a subtle trace.

Hands left shaking
But no one knows why.
Trying to be stong..
Too strong to cry.

A new angel was born today.
And is flying way on high.
But left me standing here..
Without a chance to say "Goodbye"

I know your never ending love
Will always have a place in my heart.
But life isn't that easy..
I learned you can't redo things from the start.

Years have passed by
Things are getting better then it sounds.
I'll always miss you. Do you know that?
Next time I'd see you and next time you come around.

I really want to tell you something.
Although Its really hard for me to say.
Wanted to say. "I love you,"
There wont be a time when I don't miss you. I'll think about you everyday..

Just.Another.Falling.Star
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since 2008-05-08

Posts 422
Canada

1 posted 2008-07-20 08:05 PM

Zach, if this is the poem we were talking about yesterday or today, or whenever it was...its so true. I have tears rolling down my face now as I read it. Amazing poem...and I know the feeling. Thanks for bringing this out here for people to read. Library.

~*Julianna*~

"You don't know me...but I know you. That's all that matters right now... Mr.Rainey!" - Secret Window

midnightdreamer
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since 2008-02-03

Posts 309
Roy,ut

2 posted 2008-07-27 01:24 PM

it's hard to loose someone you love very much. great poem.
midnightdreamer

"It was heaven........right in the center of hell" Bella from New Moon

XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

3 posted 2008-07-29 04:16 PM

omg, if i wasn't in a store i'd be crying. I know what you mean, fantastic wrtie. Library

{~~*~~}

"You are not loyal enough to eat my orange jelly beans!...'cuase dat's just how I roll.."
{~Emily~}

I am the arch angel
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since 2008-02-02

Posts 167
nowhere,illinois,USA

4 posted 2008-07-30 12:15 PM

this zach.....is what i feel a poem that goes along with me....i may not be the only one....but it is very true....i lost my dad three years ago. and i didnt truly get to say good bye. and i miss him terribly...i'd do anything just to hear his voice again...and so i could tell him i love him. thank you zach. for such an amazing poem

If its at its worst don't stop believing, because I'm right here and I'm not leaving

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

5 posted 2008-07-30 10:28 AM

wow, umm for piggish reasons of my own I have been avoiding this poem. but then I saw it up near the frount again and read the last post. Wow, it gave me serious shivers. Thanks for the choice to read this, and thanks for being inspired.

-Kate

"Lucy: I think you are the most selfish person on the planet. George: Well that's just silly. Have you met everyone on the planet?"

Octave
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since 2008-07-29

Posts 186
Highlands, Scotland.

6 posted 2008-07-30 04:30 PM

It was beautiful. I don't even know what to say. It hits right where it hurts.

Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

7 posted 2008-08-10 11:42 AM

Thank you everyone for your kind words.. and the gratification i feel right now.. I'm glad I choose to write and post here...

~Zach~

"Only in darkness can we see the stars.
And only there is it darkest before the dawn."

Suncleaver
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since 2009-01-18

Posts 481
Stafford England

8 posted 2009-03-10 09:07 PM

You have no idea how deeply this poem touched me Zach. I had tears rolling down my face.

There's no comfort to be taken when this happens, there's just us facing the dark alone.

That doesn't mean we must fail.

Never sigh for a better world, it's already composed, played and told.

LittleWillow
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since 2007-12-27

Posts 54

9 posted 2009-06-11 12:43 PM

This is a fantastic poem. Well done.
Its got such a rythm to it..
Having its sad points, but gradually building up hope.

Keeps you going.

Fantastic.
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