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Blackened Heart
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Blackened Heart |
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Love_Skull Junior Member
since 2008-07-15
Posts 44 |
i feel like i cant open up to people Can’t open to any other soul Can’t open up to the ones I love I feel like I’ve got a blackened heart I fell as if my heart can’t open anymore Not only from the agony you gave me But for the trust you broke The respect you destroyed The feelings you handed out like free flyer's I trusted you with my deepest thoughts and my deepest feelings My deepest respect I had for you that was broken with your distrusting soul You blackened my heart until it was blacker then burnt coals I feel like you hate me I feel like you want me to die So I go in a corner and cry out my feelings I go and cry out my soul Cry until my breathe is drawn and I can breathe no more As my breathe ceases I see myself crying Crying to my death And it was all because of the heart that turned black The one that you gave The one you gave to me I died alone in a corner crying, just me with my blackened heart… By:Leah Stonis |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
Hang in there Leah, it will get better, I promise. Nice poem, relateable. And Hey, I almost forgot- Welcome to PIP!!!!! -Kate "Lucy: I think you are the most selfish person on the planet. George: Well that's just silly. Have you met everyone on the planet?" |
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Clockwork_Orange Senior Member
since 2007-03-23
Posts 620Space Camp, IN |
this was good. i liked it. |
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