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Teen Poetry #8

So Whats It Gonna Be

Clockwork_Orange
Senior Member

since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

0 posted 2008-07-14 01:28 PM

is there something written in your words
a message im supposed to find
something i should have seen
thats been hidden in the lines

is there something you want to say
then just say it to my face
dont turn your back on me
and play those evil games

im standing in the open
with my bulletproof vest
waiting for the gunshots
to put me to rest

and i can only bleed tears
for you my friend
the rums run out
your at the gallows end

so what do you want to say
now that were face to face
will i just be a memorie
forgotten in the days

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

1 posted 2008-07-14 05:09 PM

im standing in the open
with my bulletproof vest
waiting for the gunshots
to put me to rest

Love this!

Be who you are
And say what you feel
'Cause those who mind don't matter
And those who matter don't mind
-Dr Suess

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

2 posted 2008-07-16 03:26 PM

wow i always say this i know, but you are just incredible, how do you do it? no never mind, i like the mystery of it better. hahaha.

-Kate

"Lucy: I think you are the most selfish person on the planet. George: Well that's just silly. Have you met everyone on the planet?"

Just.Another.Falling.Star
Member

since 2008-05-08

Posts 422
Canada

3 posted 2008-07-17 06:44 PM

Absolutly amazing. I love it alot, library.

~*Julianna*~

"You don't know me...but I know you. That's all that matters right now... Mr.Rainey!" - Secret Window

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

4 posted 2008-07-17 07:14 PM

"so what do you want to say
now that were face to face
will i just be a memorie
forgotten in the days"

Ahh sad but true.. Great job!

~Zach~

"And so the lion fell in love with the lamb....,"he murmured. "What a stupid lamb," I sighed. "What a sick, masochistic lion."

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