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HersheyKiss
Member

since 2008-06-02

Posts 137
New Jersey

0 posted 2008-07-05 10:11 PM

Hey guys. This is most likely my last poem until August cause I'm going on vacation with my brother to Spain to visit my cousins. I have 4 days until I leave but I don't know if I'll get to posting.

Haunted:

I climbed the highest mountain
I swam the deepest sea
I walked to the end of the earth
But you still haunted me

I watched tons of films
And read books too
I listened to some music
But I still thought of you

I drank gallons of alcohol
I slept in bed all day
I did all I could
But didn't get away

I sliced up my arms
And slashed up my legs
I wrote stacks of poems
But you're still in my head

I cried many tears
I barely slept at night
I put on a smile
But I'm not alright

I've lost all my hope
I've lost all my strength
I've lost all my trust
And now there's nothing left

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

1 posted 2008-07-05 10:24 PM

Great write hun. Be safe in Spain.

{~~*~~}

"You are not loyal enough to eat my orange jelly beans!...'cuase dat's just how I roll.."
{~Emily~}

RevengeIsMine
Senior Member

since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

2 posted 2008-07-06 01:52 AM

Love it Danielle,
Enjoy your holiday hunni you deserve it.
You know where i am if u need ta chat or anything..

Luv,
Jess
x

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

3 posted 2008-07-06 10:18 AM

Love this whole poem... Hope things are getting for you and your brother.. i'll keep on praying.. Have fun in Spain!!

~Zach~

"And so the lion fell in love with the lamb....,"he murmured. "What a stupid lamb," I sighed. "What a sick, masochistic lion."

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

4 posted 2008-07-06 10:22 AM

it was pretty good i must say. I enjoyed it alot, sorry you're hurting.

-Kate

"Lucy: I think you are the most selfish person on the planet. George: Well that's just silly. Have you met everyone on the planet?"

BrittanyJ
Member

since 2007-06-03

Posts 461
Come find me?

5 posted 2008-07-06 05:17 PM

"I've lost all my hope
I've lost all my strength
I've lost all my trust
And now there's nothing left"

I must say that i liked this...and have fun on vacation

If you love someone, let them go. If they come back, they were always yours. If they don't, they never were.

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

6 posted 2008-07-07 01:46 PM

Sorry.

Have fun in Spain, no one deserses it more than you.

Be who you are
And say what you feel
'Cause those who mind don't matter
And those who matter don't mind
-Dr Suess

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