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Just.Another.Falling.Star
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since 2008-05-08
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0 posted 2008-07-01 10:29 AM


I’ll Be Here Always

Right in this very moment,
I can’t get my hopes up...
That I’ll see you once again.

I miss you so much,
Your smile and your laughter,
Your jokes and you excuses.

Why did you have to go?
You always had friends here,
Especially me...

I want you to know something,
Know that you were why I’m still here,
And that deep down—I loved you.

So now as summer break has arrived,
And you presence is missing,
I don’t know how to move on.

Please oh please come back,
Just for me?
Then we’ll have more good times.

But no—that’s not what you want,
That’s not what was going to happen,
That’s not what was in store.

I’ll be here always,
Waiting for you return,
Waiting for you to take me with you.


~*Julianna*~

Six Semper Tyrannas - Thus always to tyrants...

© Copyright 2008 Julianna - All Rights Reserved
Clockwork_Orange
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since 2007-03-23
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1 posted 2008-07-01 01:53 PM


great write, i wonder why no ones posted on this yet? i thought it was most def worth posting on. good job
BrittanyJ
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since 2007-06-03
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Come find me?
2 posted 2008-07-01 08:45 PM


"I’ll be here always,
Waiting for you return,
Waiting for you to take me with you."

Wow this is so sad...and wonderfully written at the same time.

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

Falling rain
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3 posted 2008-07-01 09:15 PM


Tragic but Beautiful words. Hope Phillip comes back to you quickly.

~Zach~

Just.Another.Falling.Star
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4 posted 2008-07-07 06:07 PM


Ya, it's not Phillip, someone nobody really knows about. Thanks for the reviews everyone!!

~*Julianna*~

Six Semper Tyrannas - Thus always to tyrants...

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