Teen Poetry #8 |
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Letter To Mommy |
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HersheyKiss Member
since 2008-06-02
Posts 137New Jersey |
Letter To Mommy: Mommy I told you he wasn't nice But for your mistake, I paid the price Late at night he came into my room From that point on all I felt was doom I screamed but you were to drunk to care I tried to run but he pulled my hair He pushed me on the floor with force But you were to busy to hear, of course I knew this was going to happen From the way he stared Did you ever look in my eyes? And see I was scared? I tried to tell you, Long before that day But you wouldn't listen You pushed it all away You said I was stubborn When I said he had to go It was stupid not to listen mommy You should have known Every time I warned you, You blocked out the sound Well guess what mommy Soon I'm going to be 10 feet below the ground Thanks mommy for being there It means a lot to know you care That you want to hear every word of mine And to always make sure I'm doing fine Oops you're not the mommy that part's for Thats for the mommy I wish you were I'd really like to thank you For trusting him,not me Cause now I saw some things I never want to see Thanks for looking the other way While he did what he did I appreciate that you never Believed your own kid It's really nice you didn't listen, Cause soon I'm going to be dead Thanks for covering your ears, For every word I said I really want to look you in the eye And tell you he never Put his hand on my knee Never stuck his head in the shower And took a peek Never hugged me tight Just a little too long Never made me bend over So he could look at my thong Never made me feel awkward Under his gaze Never crawled over me In bed where I laid Never covered my mouth And took off my shirt Never made me stay silent And pretend it didn't hurt Never did it repeatedly So much that I cried Never made me feel Like total crap inside Never took out a knife The night I finally screamed Never slit my neck open So slowly it seemed He never did it mommy Is that what you wanna hear? Will it make you feel better About the things you had feared? Well that's great mommy Glad to know it helps Hopefully now You can live with yourself Knowing those things Even though they're untrue But I'd never let you know that mommy Cause I care about you Have a good life mommy I didn't wanna ruin your fun But you had to know What your husband has done. [This message has been edited by HersheyKiss (06-30-2008 11:05 AM).] |
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hunnie_girl![]() ![]()
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
wow really heavy poem Danielle! and the ending was my favorite cos it just summed everything up.. amazing Krysti |
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thosethreewords New Member
since 2008-06-30
Posts 2 |
OMG u stole my poem! but you changed it so now it sucks! |
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BrittanyJ Member
since 2007-06-03
Posts 461Come find me? |
Wow...this is really sad ![]() I hope to see more of your work posted soon. So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart. |
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RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia |
You made me cry.. Hugs n hugs too u Danielle... Such strength beyond those words.. |
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STOP_JUDGiiN_M3 Junior Member
since 2007-02-07
Posts 16 |
W0W;; THiS REALLiE HAD TEARS iN MY EYES;; HUNNiE THiS WAS TRUELY DEEP! i L0VE THE WAY Y0Uh EXPLAiNED EVERYTHiNG iN TRUE DETAiL; |
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BeyaK Member
since 2008-08-07
Posts 126Philippines |
wow! I love reading this one... made me cry a bit to imagine it... great work ![]() ~~*Kaye B.*~~ |
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
I could have sworn I commented on this one, hmm. Well I like it, but it's really sad. Great poem though.. ![]() "You are not loyal enough to eat my orange jelly beans....#} |
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DeSi - BG Junior Member
since 2008-08-12
Posts 18BULGARIA |
Such a real one. And sad to. i think that is very, very nice. Hope to see more =) ![]() - Desi - The Fate That You Will Win Is The Half Battle, The Other Half Is In The Way You Fight!!! |
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Clockwork_Orange Senior Member
since 2007-03-23
Posts 620Space Camp, IN |
im starting to think you have a problem that you need to get help with. please email me if you need to. soveriegn_ataraxia@msn.com |
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Falling rain![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
I'm sorry to hear what you have wrote.. Hope things are getting a little bit better... ~Zach~ "Only in darkness can we see the stars. |
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hiddenIntheDark Junior Member
since 2008-08-27
Posts 20 |
wow, incredible poem, so sad though. |
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XoDenisseoX Junior Member
since 2008-08-09
Posts 14 |
way sad and a little messed up, but poetry wise really amazing... you've got talent! |
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Sara Mikael Junior Member
since 2008-09-12
Posts 34 |
really nice THE PAIN OF LOVE |
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KandyGrl511 Member
since 2008-11-30
Posts 52Michigan |
sad.. really truely sad!i loved that you wrote this poem!?! |
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