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spiderilia
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since 2008-04-24
Posts 21
Israel

0 posted 2008-06-29 06:30 AM


Story About My Friend

I'll tell you story
'bout my friend
please listen to it
'till the end
I hope youll like it
that was hard,
to tell you every thing
using this art
thats all for now,
so now I start

my friend looks nice
he always funny
sometimes a maniac
sometimes honey
sometimes bad demon
but most of the time bugs bunny...
now when you know him, we can start
now let me tell you how he fell apart

so now this friend
he learned at school
he wasnt geek
but then he wasnt really cool
sometimes was smart
and sometimes acted like a fool
there was one girl, her name - sharon
that was the girl that he crushed on...

let me explain
she was like star
so beautiful and close
but yet so far...
I asked him :"do you match?"
he answered me :"We are!"
I told him :"my friend, you are mad,
this pretty girl , you will not get"

the time moved on
and day by day
he thought of how
to ask her out his way
he thoght of what to do
and what to say
back then he didn't understand
that this was girl that he really can't get...

he wrote a poem
pour poet soul,
he got a rose
and gave her call
in rain , all wet
he found her home
he knocked, and now he is looking at
this pretty girl that he can't get

thay talked
he really triend to show
his soul and every thing he is
but all he got was no
he saig :"good night..."
and got out slow
all filled with sorrow and regret
about this girl he couldnt get

day followed day
half year had passed
my friend did hope
his love did last
he got all drunk
to try and to forget the past...
he tried so hard then to forget
forget the girl he couldn't get.

one night
he hears knock on the door
a knock he never
heard before
he opens up
and almost falling to the floor
who's standing there all cold and wet?
thats right the girl he couldnt get...

she says:" you got me
now Im yours
I kept the poem you wrote,
I kept the rose
I love you now!
why? just because!"
he says:"You love me? now? too bad...
you are a girl that I don't want to get

tip to you girls
just think before
before the answer
and before youll close the door
maybe there's more
then meets the eye
maybe someday he wont be just a friend
he'll be a guy that you will want to get...

thats all for now... thank you if you did not fall a sleep, this was a long one... see ya soon...
=P

[This message has been edited by spiderilia (06-29-2008 07:38 AM).]

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Clockwork_Orange
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since 2007-03-23
Posts 620
Space Camp, IN
1 posted 2008-06-29 02:22 PM


wow. thats an incredible poem. i love it.
hunnie_girl
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2 posted 2008-06-30 03:46 PM


you havent been here for soo long!!!1 so good to have you back even if its for a little while.. I loved this story.. really intense!
Krysti

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