Teen Poetry #8 |
Story About My Friend |
spiderilia Junior Member
since 2008-04-24
Posts 21Israel |
Story About My Friend I'll tell you story 'bout my friend please listen to it 'till the end I hope youll like it that was hard, to tell you every thing using this art thats all for now, so now I start my friend looks nice he always funny sometimes a maniac sometimes honey sometimes bad demon but most of the time bugs bunny... now when you know him, we can start now let me tell you how he fell apart so now this friend he learned at school he wasnt geek but then he wasnt really cool sometimes was smart and sometimes acted like a fool there was one girl, her name - sharon that was the girl that he crushed on... let me explain she was like star so beautiful and close but yet so far... I asked him :"do you match?" he answered me :"We are!" I told him :"my friend, you are mad, this pretty girl , you will not get" the time moved on and day by day he thought of how to ask her out his way he thoght of what to do and what to say back then he didn't understand that this was girl that he really can't get... he wrote a poem pour poet soul, he got a rose and gave her call in rain , all wet he found her home he knocked, and now he is looking at this pretty girl that he can't get thay talked he really triend to show his soul and every thing he is but all he got was no he saig :"good night..." and got out slow all filled with sorrow and regret about this girl he couldnt get day followed day half year had passed my friend did hope his love did last he got all drunk to try and to forget the past... he tried so hard then to forget forget the girl he couldn't get. one night he hears knock on the door a knock he never heard before he opens up and almost falling to the floor who's standing there all cold and wet? thats right the girl he couldnt get... she says:" you got me now Im yours I kept the poem you wrote, I kept the rose I love you now! why? just because!" he says:"You love me? now? too bad... you are a girl that I don't want to get tip to you girls just think before before the answer and before youll close the door maybe there's more then meets the eye maybe someday he wont be just a friend he'll be a guy that you will want to get... thats all for now... thank you if you did not fall a sleep, this was a long one... see ya soon... =P [This message has been edited by spiderilia (06-29-2008 07:38 AM).] |
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Clockwork_Orange Senior Member
since 2007-03-23
Posts 620Space Camp, IN |
wow. thats an incredible poem. i love it. |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
you havent been here for soo long!!!1 so good to have you back even if its for a little while.. I loved this story.. really intense! Krysti |
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