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Teen Poetry #8

Porcelain Angel

broken_imperfection
Junior Member

since 2008-06-27

Posts 15
WV, USA

0 posted 2008-06-27 11:44 PM

She stands there
on the path of death..
Looking up to that
of nothing left..

She lays down
to rest her eyes..
To let her mind calm
and to let go of her lies...

She dreams of that
of running away..
To not live this life
and not to breathe another day...

The wings she desires
of that of the night..
She wants to be the
one to not put up a fight..

She wants to have the smile
of that of the truth..
She wants to be referred for once
as not apart of the youth..

She wants to be strong
and not capable of breaking..
But for right now
she's a porcelain angel in the making...

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

1 posted 2008-06-28 01:09 AM

I love this. It flows so nicely. Great job, and welcome yo pip! I hope to see more.

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"You are not loyal enough to eat my orange jelly beans!...'cuase dat's just how I roll.."
{~Emily~}

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2008-06-28 11:43 AM

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" It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

3 posted 2008-06-28 04:56 PM

WELCOME TO PIP!!!!

I realy liked the flow in this.

VICTORY TO THE MOLE PEOPLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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