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Teen Poetry #8

A Letter To God

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

0 posted 2008-06-27 07:50 PM

Love me less for what I've done,
let me be the only one.
Forget me please, don't try to understand.
Allow me to fall, let go of my hand.
I can't say I'll survive on my own,
but for that same reason I wish you'd
leave me alone. It's hard you see to know
who's who. It's extreamly hard to love you.
Forget that I was made to be,
forget that you created me.
Turn your back, don't look here, leave me
be with my fear. I promise you I'll be all
right, I give my word I'll try to fight.
There's just one favor I ask of you,
Love me less for who I am
and just let go of my hand.

{~~*~~}

"You are not loyal enough to eat my orange jelly beans!...'cuase dat's just how I roll.."
{~Emily~}

broken_imperfection
Junior Member

since 2008-06-27

Posts 15
WV, USA

1 posted 2008-06-28 01:30 AM

Thanks for your comments lovely, and as for you, you most definately have talent.. - Jen

"Don't hit your kids. No, seriously, they have guns now."

RevengeIsMine
Senior Member

since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

2 posted 2008-06-28 05:24 AM

OMFG... Emmi.. U just blew me away..

When god lets go of your hand. I wanna hold it okay??

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

3 posted 2008-06-28 04:55 PM

Amazing.
But be careful what you wish for OK. God hates the sin, but he will always love you. If you ask him to leave, he will.
Trust me he will.
But there is so much more, Gods love is so amazing.

And never hate yourself OK? Please you're worth it. God knows it, and if you look deep enough so do you.

(Library)

VICTORY TO THE MOLE PEOPLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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