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HersheyKiss
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0 posted 2008-06-26 09:13 AM


I started writing this last year but, couldn't seem to finish it because it brought bad memories. I ended up finishing it couple weeks ago. I don't have a title either.

Untitled:

Somehow I ended up in a strange place
I awoke to a strange man brushing his fingers across
my face
I realized I was tied up, sitting on the floor
I saw there was a chair, tilted up to block a door

I looked around, hopelessly trying to find an escape
When I suddenly heard him whisper, "are you ready to be raped?"
I swear I just stopped breathing
Until my heart wildly started beating

He bent down, kissing me on the forehead
I tried to scream but nothing was said
There was too much rope shoved in my mouth
Apparently it was there to keep me from being loud

Tears were falling from my eyes
I was struggling harder now, trying to get untied
He walked away tracing the blade of a knife
He said "this will be the best last day of your life"

He only untied my ankles,and told me "its a game"
"The more you resist, the longer you'll be in pain"
I fought him as he pushed me hard against the wall
Suddenly he slid that blade, cutting open my jaw

He told me that was just a warning sign
"It'll go deeper into your face the next time"
So I held it in, biting through my lip and tongue
What did I do to deserve this? I'm much to young

I was shaking, hurting, quietly crying
My body was aching, my soul was dying
Finally I was pushed away, so I laid there hardly alive
I closed my eyes, those images are there forever, Why did I have to survive?

October 2007

[This message has been edited by HersheyKiss (06-26-2008 11:03 AM).]

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1 posted 2008-06-26 12:19 PM


wow.. Danielle! you just gave me the shivers...
Krysti

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2 posted 2008-06-26 05:27 PM


So so so sad. You almost had me crying. Great write though, Library.

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