The Mask of Cruel Darkness

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Teen Poetry #8

The Mask of Cruel Darkness

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

0 posted 2008-06-23 10:11 PM

If I could only forgive
maybe things would change.
The sun woulnd't shine balck,
and there would be stars in the night.
If I only were alone
maybe I could sleep a hauntless dream,
or walk alone in this masochistic light.

It haunts me, hunts me
finds me in the dark.
It tempts me, holds me
unlocks my sorrows.
Capture me, let me leave.
Dismiss me from my already cruel nightmare.

If only he would finish this torment
just do the job and leave.
Stop my world from endless circels,
shoot and take a bow.
Do what you came for,
don't linger beside my body.
Either finish or leave,
but don't pretend to care anymore.

{~~*~~}

"You are not loyal enough to eat my orange jelly beans!...'cuase dat's just how I roll.."
{~Emily~}

Clockwork_Orange
Senior Member

since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

1 posted 2008-06-24 08:58 PM

nice. its diffrent from my style, so its someting new to grasp, but i like it alot.

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

2 posted 2008-06-25 12:27 PM

Thank you
{~~*~~}

"You are not loyal enough to eat my orange jelly beans!...'cuase dat's just how I roll.."
{~Emily~}

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