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Beauty in the breakdown |
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I am the arch angel Member
since 2008-02-02
Posts 167nowhere,illinois,USA |
There she is Every step sheds beauty and grace she is so special delicate as a flower As you see her stumble on some trouble Try to keep your pace she fears of being by herself angels do tower Beautiful as a butterfly stubborn as a bee She will be the one to save us all She is so special to me Can it be at its worst? have you been to the monsters ball Don't fear to be alone I am here for you Don't you forget Life is in your own hands Tori this one was for you keep on keeping on--Joe Dirt |
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RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia |
OMG amazing.. such talent you have... love it soo much... Hugs to tori too... |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Well done Keagan.  I'm glad your helping Tori... Great poem!"It might be easy to fall for someone but it's also easy to break a heart." - Zach Booker. |
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shattered-smiles Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 247inside the shadows |
Keagan . . . thanx so much. I'm sitting here crying like a loser and I don't even care that I am. This means so much to me that you wrote this for me, I can't thank you enough. You're so amazing, I don't know how I would be without you. Thanx cutie, love ya! TJ So cut me into pieces and tape me into something beautiful... |
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
Great poem. I read the first bit and I already knew who it was for.I also wanna say thanx to all of you pip people who have been there for Tori when I couldn't be, even if it hurt me. Again keagan, great poem. {~~*~~} "You are not loyal enough to eat my orange jelly beans!...'cuase dat's just how I roll.." |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
ohhh wow you have talent Keagan I love this Krysti |
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Clockwork_Orange Senior Member
since 2007-03-23
Posts 620Space Camp, IN |
nice. i like it alot. your style is really progressive. nice. |
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wisdomofthesword Member
since 2007-12-17
Posts 224the last place on earth |
wow I really like this, such talent I don't care if you think I'm a fool but don't ever tell me so |
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Just.Another.Falling.Star Member
since 2008-05-08
Posts 422Canada |
Keagen, this poem is absolutly stunning. I know myself that Tori is greatful for this to be hers. Amazing once again, library. ~*Julianna*~ |
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