Suffering Worries of a Forgotten Heart

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Teen Poetry #8

Suffering Worries of a Forgotten Heart

shattered-smiles
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since 2008-01-20

Posts 247
inside the shadows

0 posted 2008-06-18 11:16 PM

If a persons love is theirs to give,
Why don’t you accept it?
Everything they say,
Every compliment you receive,
You always turn it into hate.
You say you want to be loved,
You say you want someone to care.
But why is it, when someone says
“I love you,”
you simply reject it thinking they only said it
to make you feel better.
You wish you could accept their love,
Accept their willingness to care.
There’s just one thing that always gets in the way;
You won’t let anyone suffer
Because of you.

So cut me into pieces and tape me into something beautiful...

I am the arch angel
Member

since 2008-02-02

Posts 167
nowhere,illinois,USA

1 posted 2008-06-18 11:33 PM

you gotta let people in..you have to..... if you want to expierence theyre love then let it in.............if you leave it out...then you will keep thinking nobody loves you i love you, everyone loves you............u have done nothing to make anyone here not love you....ur wonderful

keep on keeping on--Joe Dirt

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

2 posted 2008-06-19 12:08 PM

Wow I know how you feel Tori.. Talk to Keagan.. he can prolly help you out.. Hope things get better.. I'll pray for ya'

"It might be easy to fall for someone but it's also easy to break a heart." - Zach Booker.

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

3 posted 2008-06-19 01:32 AM

geeat poem Tori.. love this!
Krysti

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

4 posted 2008-06-19 11:03 AM

Exellent write!

If you want help you can talk to me.

There's a fine line between Genius and Insanity
I have Erased that Line
-Mark Paron

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

5 posted 2008-06-19 12:36 PM

I agree with keagan. Hun you know how much I love you and that I wont ever give up. Stay strong and relive the better times. Always here.

{~~*~~}

"You are not loyal enough to eat my orange jelly beans!...'cuase dat's just how I roll.."
{~Emily~}

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