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RevengeIsMine
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since 2006-07-08
Posts 820
Australia

0 posted 2008-06-10 07:43 AM



Did I tell you that I love you today?
Have I looked into your eyes?
Cause I’ve taken down that last remaining wall
And finally stopped the cries

Do you know how scared I used to be?
Scared for you being scared of me?
But taking down that barrier and telling you how I feel
Makes me realise that loving you has always been this real

So this is how it is, my heart laid on the line
So take it from an expert, I’m so glad that your mine

Andrew I love you, always have and always will
I wanna keep this moment, hold it near and hold it still
You the guy I love, the guy I want you to be
And I’ll love you with every little part I have inside of me

So here I am all, my faults and flaws
You said you wanted to see me and now you’ll see it all

You’re unforgettable and mine til the end
My life, my love, my heartbeat and my lifelong friend
So why you’re listening I have one more thing to say
Did I tell you that I love you and did I tell you that today?

© Copyright 2008 A Typical Aussie Chick - All Rights Reserved
XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20
Posts 891
Neverland
1 posted 2008-06-10 05:23 PM


Awe. This is so cute, and beautiful. Great write sweetie. Library

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{~Emily~}

Earl Robertson
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since 2008-01-21
Posts 753
BC, Canada
2 posted 2008-06-10 05:27 PM


LOL I LIKE this!! Great work, and yes quite cute. (Library!)

Sanity is NOT a matter of statistics.
The earth is round, germs cause desease, and God speaks.

I am insane of course BUT STILL!!

Just.Another.Falling.Star
Member
since 2008-05-08
Posts 422
Canada
3 posted 2008-06-10 05:50 PM


Great write. Very cute too. Keep it up! Library.

~*Julianna*~

Six Semper Tyrannas - Thus always to tyrants...

eternally_singing
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since 2007-12-18
Posts 123
PA, United States
4 posted 2008-06-10 05:57 PM


I like it! very good

Anyone odd is normal, and anyone normal is odd...


Falling rain
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since 2008-01-31
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5 posted 2008-06-10 06:18 PM


Wow Jess.. sounds alot like one of my poem's i wrote not to long ago.. hmm weird.. but I agree this is cute lol Great write!


"It might be easy to fall for someone but it's also easy to break a heart." - Zach Booker.

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