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HersheyKiss
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since 2008-06-02
Posts 137
New Jersey

0 posted 2008-06-09 03:33 PM


Internal Sleep

A burning passion
An internal rage
A wounded animal
Chained in a cage

Purplish bruises
Outlined her smooth skin
She cowered afraid
As the pain burned within

A fist to her ribs
Cold words in her ear
Eyes dark and distant
Held unyielding fear

Shoved and hit hard
Bruised bones oh so frail
The dark abyss
Of emotional hell

Weakened knees gave way
As she fell to weep
And closed her eyes
Praying for internal sleep

© Copyright 2008 Danielle - All Rights Reserved
Clockwork_Orange
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since 2007-03-23
Posts 620
Space Camp, IN
1 posted 2008-06-09 05:22 PM


so sad. but so beautiful.
XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20
Posts 891
Neverland
2 posted 2008-06-09 05:49 PM


I second that. You are the next RevengeIsMine... 'cause she's the bestest. keep writing and you'll change the world. Be strong.

         {~~*~~}

{&]ebbing.away.from*my.pain.}}
{~Emily~}

Earl Robertson
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since 2008-01-21
Posts 753
BC, Canada
3 posted 2008-06-09 09:56 PM


I second. Keep writing Hershey Keep Writing!

(whenever I stop I KNOW I've hit rock bottom (hasn't happened for a long time come to think of it))

Sanity is NOT a matter of statistics.
The earth is round, germs cause desease, and God speaks.

I am insane of course BUT STILL!!

HersheyKiss
Member
since 2008-06-02
Posts 137
New Jersey
4 posted 2008-06-10 08:19 PM


thanks but for now my last post till idk when. Thanks for all your help advice and support

Danielle

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