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HersheyKiss
Member

since 2008-06-02

Posts 137
New Jersey

0 posted 2008-06-07 08:02 PM

A DAUGHTER'S PROMISE:

Every time that I smile,
Every time that I sigh,
I think of your face,
And a tear escapes my eye.

You were my world,
My inspiration and my heart,
But when you left me,
I thought I would fall apart.

You were my best friend,
My one true 'confidante',
And that's not all you were,
You were also my mom.

I didn't want to live without you,
But you would have wanted me to,
And if there's anyone I want to make happy,
That anyone is you

I would have given anything to have you back,
But I know now that it was meant to be,
For you are still watching from up there,
And I know you're watching me.

I'll make you proud mom,
I'm going to fulfill your wish,
You're going to see me and smile,
That's a daughter's promise.

rest in peace mommy

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

1 posted 2008-06-07 08:39 PM

Danielle this is truley beautiful and sad,but I love it. library.

{~~*~~}

{&]ebbing.away.from*my.pain.}}
{~Emily~}

HersheyKiss
Member

since 2008-06-02

Posts 137
New Jersey

2 posted 2008-06-07 08:49 PM

Thank you.

eternally_singing
Member

since 2007-12-18

Posts 123
PA, United States

3 posted 2008-06-07 10:56 PM

stunning. Very well done~ library

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

4 posted 2008-06-07 11:09 PM

Beautiful! library

Sanity is NOT a matter of statistics.
The earth is round, germs cause desease, and God speaks.

I am insane of course BUT STILL!!

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

5 posted 2008-06-08 08:26 PM

*snifles* Beautiful.. Simply beautiful... (Library)

"It might be easy to fall for someone but it's also easy to break a heart." - Zach Booker.

The Shadow in Blue
Member

since 2006-05-18

Posts 493
EL, Michigan

6 posted 2008-06-08 09:51 PM

I'm speechless. Bravo. My condolences about your mom. I'm sure she is proud of you.

~Jill

JNS

"I celebrate myself, and sing myself,
And what I assume you shall assume,
For every atom belonging to me as good belongs to you."-WW

Clockwork_Orange
Senior Member

since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

7 posted 2008-06-08 11:19 PM

OMG! A SHADOW IN BLUE!!!! its been a LONG time! will you check out some of my stuff?

and as to this poem... beautiful. but tragic. makes me so sad. but still the words are perfectly strung together.

The Shadow in Blue
Member

since 2006-05-18

Posts 493
EL, Michigan

8 posted 2008-06-09 07:41 PM

Clockwork Orange- Not just any Shadow in Blue, but THE Shadow in Blue. And of course I'll poruse your poems Clockwork (good book by the way).

HersheyKiss-*Bump*
I forgot to put this in my library.
~Ciao

JNS

"I celebrate myself, and sing myself,
And what I assume you shall assume,
For every atom belonging to me as good belongs to you."-WW

HersheyKiss
Member

since 2008-06-02

Posts 137
New Jersey

9 posted 2008-06-09 08:21 PM

Thanks everyone

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