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HersheyKiss Member
since 2008-06-02
Posts 137New Jersey |
Never Forget The hate that I feel inside for you For all the crappy things you have put me through With all of your abuse and all of your lies For every tear that left my eyes This anger has completely taken over me Like a fire burning through a tree Like the waves crashing in the sea No more will I continue to let this be I will not let you hurt me anymore You told me you would stop you swore You have done enough to lose my trust I now look at you with hate and disgust You have scarred me for the rest my life You can see just how much every time you look into my eyes Tell me how it is that you live each and everyday Knowing that you did that and made me this way Always scared, hurt, sad, and mad How could you ever call yourself a dad |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
Again wonderful poem. But I am now angry. I'm angry at your dad and I've never met him! Every poem you've written has had fear, anger, sorrow all aimed at him! The measure of an artist a simple thing to tell... Let me tell you if I could do anything besides words I would. Sanity is NOT a matter of statistics. |
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
I agree. Honey, you need to get yourself some help. Please just try. I will support you in anyway possible, and I'm sure I'm not the only one. {~~*~~} {&]ebbing.away.from*my.pain.}} |
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HersheyKiss Member
since 2008-06-02
Posts 137New Jersey |
It's fine it's just a lil bump in the road I'll get through it. Thanks for your help though. ~Danielle~ |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
If you realy mean that great. If not...please make sure you never lie to yourself. Make sure you're alright before you try to shut down help. lol In short don't make my mistakes. Sanity is NOT a matter of statistics. |
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HersheyKiss Member
since 2008-06-02
Posts 137New Jersey |
yea your right i'm just lying to myself I guess I'm just hoping one day it'll stop but by saying that its a huge lie cuz I know its never going to happen |
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
It will happen. But not by itself. You need to do something about it. I don't mean to give you a hard time and I know I don't know you, but I do know that you are hurting. And that is what matters. You may be scared, you may feel hopeless and worthless; but there are so many ways you can get help. You can get out of this, and you wont have to lie anymore. Pain shouldn't be a secret that people keep to themsleves, because eventualy it will only get worse and other things will start. I don't want to scare you either, but this is a serious situation. I understand that you are not entierly sure about things, but life is about choices. And to live a life that is your own, you need to not be afraid anymore. You will always remember, but it's never to late to try and start over. I'm sorry if I'm pestering you or annoying you but even though I don't know you, I could say that you are a wonderful person, and you deffinetly deserve better. {~~*~~} {&]ebbing.away.from*my.pain.}} {~Emily~} |
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HersheyKiss Member
since 2008-06-02
Posts 137New Jersey |
I know I really need help but its very hard for me to like say what's going on. I've been thinking about it a lot lately and really I get what I diserve and its my own fault but I really will try and talk to someone. Thanks for your help. ~ Danielle ~ |
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eternally_singing Member
since 2007-12-18
Posts 123PA, United States |
You have an amazing ability and spectacular poems however I always end up being sad and angry afterwards. I know that it is difficult but you need to tell someone, please. The longer you hear something repeated to you the more likely you will believe what they are saying, even if it is not true. There is absolutely no way that you deserve abuse because absolutely no one does. As the others, I am here - so email me if you need too. You should not have to suffer. |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Anger is another way to build yourself up, like sorrow breaks you down.. I'm not saying being angry at him is good but it does slightly help... I know you might be angry at him but try not to.. ya i know your prolly thinking "Psht! ya right!" Iknow, I know, you have every right to be mad at him.. trust me, me and my old man haven't spoken in years now.. And i don't plan on talking to him.. Because I'll never forgive him for what he's done to me and my brothers.. But you don't have to forgive him.. just accept him for what he's done... I better said then done.. Just try.. Please.. you don't want to end up like me..
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keelin New Member
since 2008-06-07
Posts 4 |
Your poem has a nice flow, and anyone who has experienced someone like that in their life can relate to it, keep up the good work <3 |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
Now I don't know anything about these kind of relationships, or how they affect you...But no one knows better than I the effect you can have on yourself. Shout your pain from the rooftops, let it be seen by those who care. Never never never never bottle up anger hate or sorrow. It will kill you, beyond any physical blow, it will eat your insides like acid. It's not fun, it can be avoided, it can be stoped. Never listin to another word your father says, when he buries you under insults close your ears. You don't matter to him? Don't let him or his words matter to you. Ha ha ha much easier said than done. I should know, blocking him out can't be much easier than blocking yourself out...and I'll bet you have to do both! I have faith in you. Best of Luck Frank Sanity is NOT a matter of statistics. |
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The Great Onion Junior Member
since 2008-06-05
Posts 40 |
i've had those feelings before, but now i respect my parents. keep in mind that your parents are only doing whats best for you. i was really ticked off once when my friend invited me to go to Big Bear over memorial weekend, but as a type of person my Mom is, she is concerned about my safety. i know, it kinda sucks to have parents sometimes but if you and your parents ever get into a fight, you might regret it in the future when your parents are on their deathbed. you will regret that you haven't had a chance to be together as close as you could've been. when we're young, we take things as granted. but when we grow to be adults, you will regret what you did before. |
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HersheyKiss Member
since 2008-06-02
Posts 137New Jersey |
thanks everyone. The great onion nothing he is doing is for my best intrest or my brothers best intrest. We used to be close but he's the one who made a change and now I honestly don't regret anything because I never did anything to him. He's the one that should be regretting for losing his daughter. I'm sorry if I should shelfish but I never did anything to make him like this |
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
You aren't selfish, and you're right. You didn't do anything. {~~*~~} {&]ebbing.away.from*my.pain.}} |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
Which angers me. Allot. Sanity is NOT a matter of statistics. |
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HersheyKiss Member
since 2008-06-02
Posts 137New Jersey |
Thanks I thought I was being a little selfish but maybe not |
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