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HersheyKiss Member
since 2008-06-02
Posts 137New Jersey |
Smile: If at times you feel you want to cry. And life seems such a trial. Above the clouds there’s a bright blue sky So make your tears a smile. As you travel on life’s way With its many ups and downs Remember it’s quite true to say One smile is worth a dozen frowns. Among the worlds expensive things A smile is very cheap And when you give a smile away, You get one back to keep. Happiness comes at times to all But sadness comes unbidden And sometimes a few tears must fall Among the laughter hidden. So when friends have sadness on their face And troubles round them piled The world will seem a better place And all because you smiled. |
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
I absolutly love this. There is nothing more I can say except that this is beautiful and deffinetly going in my library. Great job. {&]ebbing.away.from*my.pain.}} {~Emily~} [This message has been edited by XxForever.BrokenxX (06-05-2008 10:12 PM).] |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
Brilliance! Library. Sanity is NOT a matter of statistics. |
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Lincoln Member
since 2007-12-03
Posts 62Earth |
LOVED IT!!!! "Be thou the rainbow in the storms of life. The evening beam that smiles the clouds away, and tints tomorrow with prophetic ray." -- Lord Byron |
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keelin New Member
since 2008-06-07
Posts 4 |
This is a really lovely, powerful poem. Nice work <3 |
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precious pearls Member
since 2009-07-24
Posts 110NJ; United States |
Love it, absolutely loved it!!!! I absoluteley agree with you, and there is no one who could have said it better!!!! |
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