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The end of things
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The end of things |
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wolf girl Member
since 2007-12-03
Posts 150washington, US |
the things i use to say the dreams that went away its crazy how things changed who is to take the blame? how am i suppose to stay sane? I failed just as i have at life almost on sight the moment you died i lost light i lost sight i fell stumbling through the dark its hard to believe its been a year since you died and left me here now i burry you with tears in my eyes how am i suppose to say goodbye? |
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Belinda Member
since 2006-01-30
Posts 126UK |
Good write, I was very impressed. Had an unsteady flow but I thought that was effective. Sad poem though, we don't always have to say goodbye, sometimes just bye for now. What doesn't kill you will only make you stronger. Belinda~* Expect nothing, Prepare for anything. |
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Aditi New Member
since 2008-06-06
Posts 3 |
Well, I too am a teenager trying to write in poems.It is kind of relaxation it gives to me when an emotion of mine gets extreme. Your poem was a nice attempt.Personally i liked it.It is qiute a sad one.But truly shows dat it has come directly from your heart. |
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