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HersheyKiss
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since 2008-06-02

Posts 137
New Jersey

0 posted 2008-06-02 03:51 PM

Our Hearts Will Always Touch

When I laid there beside you,
Could you feel me there?
My arms were wrapped around you,
And I was stroking your hair.

I was talking about all the good times,
For me they were every single day.
I wanted you to feel love and comfort,
And happy in some way.

I watched your every breath,
And prayed that each one wasn't your last.
The time we got to share together,
Went by too quick...Too fast.

I wanted you to wake up,
Please Mom open your eyes.
Tell me this is a nightmare,
And not our goodbyes.

As your last breath grew closer,
We laid there peacefully together.
My heart continually breaking,
Because I wanted you forever.

Then there it was,
Your final breath of air.
I didn't want to believe it,
This is so cruel and not fair.

I held your beautiful face,
And prayed you'd breath again.
I wasn't ready for you to go,
I couldn't admit that this was the end.

But then I realized that you were now in peace,
And not suffering anymore.
You were beginning the life of an Angel,
And your body would no loner be sore.

I held you close and squeezed you tight,
And tried to say goodbye.
I've lost my Mom and my number one best friend,
All my heart could do is cry.

I slowly got up,
I wanted so much to stay.
I leaned over and gave you one more kiss,
It was so hard to walk away.

Mom you are my entire world,
And I miss you so very much.
I wish I could feel your lovable cuddle,
And your soft and gentle touch.

But for now I have to wait,
Until we meet again.
You will always be in my heart and thoughts,
My dear Mom and best friend.

Always and Forever,
Our hearts will always touch.
Always and Forever,
Your baby girl loves you so much.

RIP- Oct. 1965 - Mar. 2008

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

1 posted 2008-06-02 05:27 PM

This is a beautiful poem. It seems (to me) to eminate peace dispite the topic.

Sorry about your mother. I know thats not enough but on the internet that's all I have.

And welcome to Pip!!

May all your poems be as good as this one!

"And the sky...the sky became...PINK!!!" (Seusical the Musical)

eternally_singing
Member

since 2007-12-18

Posts 123
PA, United States

2 posted 2008-06-02 05:45 PM

Absolutly beautiful.

and welcome to PIP! hope to see more!

At night a candle's brighter than the sun

HersheyKiss
Member

since 2008-06-02

Posts 137
New Jersey

3 posted 2008-06-02 07:31 PM

Hey, thanks for your comments.

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

4 posted 2008-06-02 08:50 PM

This is beautiful. Such a lovely poem, and lots of emotion too. you almost had me crying. Great job, and welcome to PIP.

{~~*~~}

{&]ebbing.away.from*my.pain.}}
{~Emily~}

Belinda
Member

since 2006-01-30

Posts 126
UK

5 posted 2008-06-03 08:53 AM

wow,
just wow.
i'm really sorry to hear about your mum that is awful.
great write though, you clearly idolised her.

and welcome

i look forward to reading more.

take care

Belinda~*

Expect nothing, Prepare for anything.

precious pearls
Member

since 2009-07-24

Posts 110
NJ; United States

6 posted 2009-08-19 05:05 PM

This is sooo PRETTY ( I want to use italicizes but I can't..srry! )
You totally have a gift, just absolutely heart wrenchingly beautiful... it emanated so much hurt yet so much love... wonderful, just beyond wonderful!!!

Always,
Kai (a.k.a. precious pearls)

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