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Tripping on my Tong
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Tripping on my Tong |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
Tripping on my Tong Congratulations You’ve caught me Off guard again I’ m getting All my murds Wixed up As strut I Why to say… You know That I truss you I dove your Filing laugh But I’m getting All my murds Wixed up As fall I Why to Say I fetch my Breath from Fleeing true And as the Says Go sigh Dove flutters In my poor part But I’m getting All my murds Wixed up Each and every say As each say It sews away I know that I Should have said I lug you Tong ago "And the sky...the sky became...PINK!!!" (Seusical the Musical) |
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eternally_singing Member
since 2007-12-18
Posts 123PA, United States |
I loved it! very clever~ library At night a candle's brighter than the sun |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
YOu- my friend are brilliant. -Kate "Lucy: I think you are the most selfish person on the planet. George: Well that's just silly. Have you met everyone on the planet?" |
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Belinda Member
since 2006-01-30
Posts 126UK |
really enjoyed this write. very cleverly writtey. well done  Belinda~* Expect nothing, Prepare for anything. |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
ROFL Thanks guys!! The inspiration for this came from the play/skit "Marred Bliss" which I'm doing for a drama final project. Most of the brilliance is there. "And the sky...the sky became...PINK!!!" (Seusical the Musical) [This message has been edited by Earl Robertson (06-02-2008 10:56 PM).] |
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