It all happened right by the sea.

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Teen Poetry #8

It all happened right by the sea.

Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

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Small town, Illinois

0 posted 2008-05-25 08:35 PM

Eh i have writers block and i tried to write something today. Enjoy!
~Zach~
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I'm lost in my memoires
From way back then
We were two fools in love.
What more could it been?

Our love was unboundable
We were tight as can be
Intill we went on a date
By the cold, dark sea

The waves were crashing
as the stars shown above
Intill you looked into my eyes and said.
"Your not my love"

My heart broken in two
And torn apart.
I never wanted this to happen
But you just stole my heart.

I'm older now.
And time has gone by
I'm done with you
To know your just a lie.

I'll try to hold on.
Cause I know deep inside.
That i truely love you
But it'll have to hide.

Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

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Small town, Illinois

1 posted 2008-05-27 01:44 PM

Yeah this isn't my best. I had writers block and i tried to get rid of it. oh well..

~Zach~

"Fate leads the willing, and drags along the reluctant."

XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20

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Neverland

2 posted 2008-05-27 05:02 PM

I liked it! At first I thought I had already read it..but apreantly not. Great wirte.

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{~Emily~}

Just.Another.Falling.Star
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since 2008-05-08

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3 posted 2008-06-01 04:27 PM

Nice poem. And I know nice is a horrible describing word but I can't think of a word to describe how true it is. So, nice, awesome, incredible, perfect. Hey, look at that, I found some more words... lol.

~*Julianna*~

Six Semper Tyrannas - Thus always to tyrants...

wisdomofthesword
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the last place on earth

4 posted 2008-06-02 01:36 AM

for some reason i read this days ago and never replied. great write Zach really heart felt

I don't care if you think I'm a fool but don't ever tell me so

Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

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Small town, Illinois

5 posted 2008-06-02 06:22 PM

lol thanks guys.. and Julianna "Hahahahahahaha!! It's Okay I'm just glad you read my poem" lol

"It might be easy to fall for someone but it's also easy to break a heart." - Zach Booker.

Belinda
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since 2006-01-30

Posts 126
UK

6 posted 2008-06-02 06:47 PM

well for someone with writers block i think that was a pretty awesome write.

look forward to readin more

Belinda~*

Expect nothing, Prepare for anything.

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