Teen Poetry #8 |
Holding On To You |
Just.Another.Falling.Star Member
since 2008-05-08
Posts 422Canada |
Holding On To You Your simple touch, That warm smile. Linger around our happy times. All throughout the summer, What great times we had. Until tragedy struck…and I was alone. Your love for me was never forgotten, All because it was in my tummy. Transforming into something that is ours. Without you I felt sick, And I couldn’t go on. But with the help of Halley…I managed. You best friend Macon still misses you, Although he never says anything. He tells Halley though, then she told me. My tummy is growing bigger and bigger, Because your love never stopped either. And now, this little child is in this world. I love you so much, I will never let go of you. And Grace will remind me of you, until I see you again. I love you, I love you, And so does this child. ~*Julianna*~ |
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Clockwork_Orange Senior Member
since 2007-03-23
Posts 620Space Camp, IN |
im not familiar with your work but i like this piece alot. |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
Wonderful. -Kate "Lucy: I think you are the most selfish person on the planet. George: Well that's just silly. Have you met everyone on the planet?" |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Once again Julianna.. You don't cease to amaze me with your words. Keep on keep'n on!! lol "It might be easy to fall for someone but it's also easy to break a heart." - Zach Booker. |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
Exellent. "And the sky...the sky became...PINK!!!" (Seusical the Musical) |
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Just.Another.Falling.Star Member
since 2008-05-08
Posts 422Canada |
Thanks for reviewing everyone! I'm glad this is going over well. This poem is actually based on the book Someone Like You, by Sarah Dessen. It's a great book! Sad, happy, confusion, frustration, and romance. Everything I look for in a great read. I suggest it to all. Thanks for reviewing again! ~*Julianna*~ |
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