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Teen Poetry #8

how can i tell you?

wolf girl
Member

since 2007-12-03

Posts 150
washington, US

0 posted 2008-05-30 12:18 PM

how can i tell you?
im scared to loose you
scared ill bruise you

the insecurities
the priorities

ill turn around and
youll be gone
just like the end of a sad song

i need you
but you dont have a clue
you are left out in the blue

i guess i sit here and wait
wait for fate

the feelings are bad
if not utterly sad

you dont know my pain
i know im insane

its the end of this game
i lay here taking the blame

RevengeIsMine
Senior Member

since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

1 posted 2008-05-30 12:40 PM

JENNA...

OMG WOW.. this is exactly what i'm feeling right now.. can relate to every word and every emotion... WOW.. amazing job..

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

2 posted 2008-05-30 08:09 PM

great write! ....library....

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

3 posted 2008-05-31 11:12 AM

Wow.. this is really good.. i deffenently know how you feel.

~Zach~

"Fate leads the willing, and drags along the reluctant."

wisdomofthesword
Member

since 2007-12-17

Posts 224
the last place on earth

4 posted 2008-06-02 01:31 AM

amazing poem

I don't care if you think I'm a fool but don't ever tell me so

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