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Teen Poetry #8

"ME"

shakalakaboomboom
Junior Member

since 2008-05-19

Posts 44
V.A, U.S.A

0 posted 2008-05-26 11:30 AM

"ME!"
~I am who I am original and wild.
Im an independent girl like destinys child.
Pretty dark hair and the big brown eyes.
Dang I even got the rule mesmorized.
Hot as fire, sweet as suga.
And not even Lil Cool J. can give me paradize.
Outgoin, glamorous, funny and strong.
And like missy I can get my freak on.
I'm sweet and bubbly even on a rainy day.

~Savana

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

1 posted 2008-05-26 11:43 AM

Nice poem. I like it.

~Zach~

"Fate leads the willing, and drags along the reluctant."

shakalakaboomboom
Junior Member

since 2008-05-19

Posts 44
V.A, U.S.A

2 posted 2008-05-26 02:01 PM

thank you zach! ^^

The Shadow in Blue
Member

since 2006-05-18

Posts 493
EL, Michigan

3 posted 2008-05-26 09:45 PM

Sweet and bubbly indeed. Enjoyable poem Savana and welcome to the teen forum. I hope it entices your wildness Miss thang.

~J.S.

shakalakaboomboom
Junior Member

since 2008-05-19

Posts 44
V.A, U.S.A

4 posted 2008-05-27 07:58 PM

yaay!! haha thanks :]

pen&paper
Senior Member

since 2006-06-06

Posts 513

5 posted 2008-05-27 08:04 PM

I really liked this one. It made me smile. Cant wait to see more from you!
Chloe

shakalakaboomboom
Junior Member

since 2008-05-19

Posts 44
V.A, U.S.A

6 posted 2008-05-28 05:29 PM

yay! thank you ^-^

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