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shakalakaboomboom
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0 posted 2008-05-26 11:30 AM



"ME!"
~I am who I am original and wild.
Im an independent girl like destinys child.
Pretty dark hair and the big brown eyes.
Dang I even got the rule mesmorized.
Hot as fire, sweet as suga.
And not even Lil Cool J. can give me paradize.
Outgoin, glamorous, funny and strong.
And like missy I can get my freak on.
I'm sweet and bubbly even on a rainy day.

~Savana

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1 posted 2008-05-26 11:43 AM


Nice poem. I like it.

~Zach~

"Fate leads the willing, and drags along the reluctant."

shakalakaboomboom
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2 posted 2008-05-26 02:01 PM


thank you zach! ^^
The Shadow in Blue
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3 posted 2008-05-26 09:45 PM


Sweet and bubbly indeed. Enjoyable poem Savana and welcome to the teen forum. I hope it entices your wildness Miss thang.


~J.S.

shakalakaboomboom
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4 posted 2008-05-27 07:58 PM


yaay!! haha thanks :]
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5 posted 2008-05-27 08:04 PM


I really liked this one. It made me smile. Cant wait to see more from you!
Chloe

shakalakaboomboom
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6 posted 2008-05-28 05:29 PM


yay! thank you ^-^


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