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Teen Poetry #8
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hiddensmiles
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since 2008-02-07
Posts 514
at the beach... i wish
0 posted 2008-05-20 05:56 PM

i lay awake at night
trying to find
a reason
for my believeing
a reason
for your deciveing
a reason
why all cant be alright

JJ
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Tripp'ncutie
Member
since 2008-05-05
Posts 73
minnasota
1 posted 2008-05-22 10:51 AM

interesting i enjoyed the straight forwardness of it all.

nice write
wisdomofthesword
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since 2007-12-17
Posts 224
the last place on earth
2 posted 2008-05-22 03:26 PM

very nice

I don't care if you think I'm a fool but don't ever tell me so
shakalakaboomboom
Junior Member
since 2008-05-19
Posts 44
V.A, U.S.A
3 posted 2008-05-22 05:25 PM

hmm...i think too much..
but that was a good poem! ^^

                            ~Savana
hiddensmiles
Senior Member
since 2008-02-07
Posts 514
at the beach... i wish
4 posted 2008-05-24 04:38 AM

thanks guys

JJ
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