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RevengeIsMine
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since 2006-07-08
Posts 820
Australia

0 posted 2008-05-19 07:06 AM



When’s this going to stop, the hurt and the pain
Because another day like this will drive me insane
The tears I cry are pure, and I’m crying them for you
For all the times you turned away when I said I love you too

No matter how hard it gets, there’s always something that’s worse
And the stronger I get, the harder it gets, to escape ur deadly curse
I know you heard me crying, I could sense it in your voice
I guess you never really cared, I guess you made your choice


So take the plea of a broken daughter and hold it in your heart
Watch the tears roll down her face from the night she fell apart

© Copyright 2008 A Typical Aussie Chick - All Rights Reserved
Amic
Junior Member
since 2008-02-17
Posts 39
...I think Im lost again...
1 posted 2008-05-19 10:00 AM


Revenge this is Amazing !
Earl Robertson
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since 2008-01-21
Posts 753
BC, Canada
2 posted 2008-05-19 11:56 AM


I'm sorry your hurting Revenge. Truly I am.
This was an amazing poem and is heading for my library.

"We all lead such elaborate lives, We don't know who's words are true." Aida

XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20
Posts 891
Neverland
3 posted 2008-05-19 02:59 PM


Im trying to think of something to say but I can't seem to. This is a really great poem, but I know you're not looking for complements. I'm here for you whenever you need me.

          {~~*~~}

{&]ebbing.away.from*my.pain.}}
{~Emily~}

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