Surrounding Screams of a Lonely Grave.

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Teen Poetry #8

Surrounding Screams of a Lonely Grave.

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

0 posted 2008-05-17 01:30 PM

Leave me be and let
me run, stumble over
everyone. Tears will
fall and hearts will
break, rip me apart;
it was fake.
Softly now I'll lay
to rest, it was fine
but not the best.
All alone in the ground,
You are who my screams
surround.

{~~*~~}

{&]ebbing.away.from*my.pain.}}
{~Emily~}

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

1 posted 2008-05-18 02:01 AM

Nice Emily. I really like this...

~Zach~

"Fate leads the willing, and drags along the reluctant."

wisdomofthesword
Member

since 2007-12-17

Posts 224
the last place on earth

2 posted 2008-05-18 02:23 AM

i love this poem, nice work

I don't care if you think I'm a fool but don't ever tell me so

Earl Robertson
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since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

3 posted 2008-05-18 05:01 PM

Brilliance. Library!

"We all lead such elaborate lives, We don't know who's words are true." Aida

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

4 posted 2008-05-18 07:45 PM

oooooooooooooooooooo creepy cool . . . . shivers child, you give me shivers . . . . *shivers*

-Kate

i'm awed, library.

I live in a Bella world. only everyone is blindingly human . . .

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

5 posted 2008-05-22 07:45 PM

I'm glad you all liked it. Thanks for reading!

{~~*~~}

{&]ebbing.away.from*my.pain.}}
{~Emily~}

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