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Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

0 posted 2008-05-17 11:22 AM

Not much of a poem here just words that kept swirling in my mind.
~Zach~

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Please don't cry honey.
Please i just don't know how to explain
Its just so hard.
I'm sorry darling. Its so hard.
Please don't
I'm trying too
Its hard enough with out you

Please just i don't want see you anymore
I just want to get over this
I can't see you.. here with me now

Don't cry please im doing the best i can
Honey.
Please love i just wanna fix this
I'm sorry that i didn't see you that one silent night
This is just too hectic here for me.
I'll leave you tonight.
Go into the night

Never to look back
Never to call back again..

All i wanted to say was that im sorry.
I didn't know what to do
Please darling.
I just can't hold on
To this love anymore..

shattered-smiles
Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 247
inside the shadows

1 posted 2008-05-17 12:05 PM

Zach..., this is really good. Like all of your poems, they have lots of expression. It's hard to hold on sometimes to that certain love but we all just have to keep trying. Great poem Zach, it made me think.

TJ

So cut me into pieces and tape me into something beautiful...

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

2 posted 2008-05-17 12:11 PM

good job!!

JJ

XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

3 posted 2008-05-17 01:12 PM

this is a really great poem, I love it. Library.

{~~*~~}

{&]ebbing.away.from*my.pain.}}
{~Emily~}

Just.Another.Falling.Star
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since 2008-05-08

Posts 422
Canada

4 posted 2008-05-17 01:55 PM

Awesome poem. Library.

~*Julianna*~

Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

5 posted 2008-05-18 01:57 AM

Thanks guys.. and special thanks to Tori.. i really appreciate it. thank you!

~Zach~

"Fate leads the willing, and drags along the reluctant."

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

6 posted 2008-05-18 07:53 PM

ahhh ahhh i knkow how it feels to be the girl in this position, how bad she doesn't want yuou to leave, how she's just hanging on, deathly afriad to lose you, even if it might be best for you. i don't know what to tell you besides that she will be in just as much pain as you, and her tears help her, so let her cry, but keep asking her not to.

oh i'm sorry lol, hope something i said in sadness will help you dear.

-Kate

I live in a Bella world. only everyone is blindingly human . . .

Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

7 posted 2008-05-19 10:21 PM

lol Yeah i kow what your saying. I know its terriable on both sides of this situation.. Its hard for the guy wanting to let go and yet inside wants to hang on.. Its realy hard... But everthing is doing better now.. or at least i hope so...

~Zach~

"Fate leads the willing, and drags along the reluctant."

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