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Teen Poetry #8

Love

Mexican Cutie
Junior Member

since 2008-05-14

Posts 18

0 posted 2008-05-16 02:14 AM

What is gonna
happen to us?

I kno that
I Love You

But do u
Love Me?

It's so hard
to tell...
b/c u never talk

When ever i walk ur way
u always turn around

I just wanna kno
whats gonna
happen to us?

Mexican~Cutie

Bahigano
Junior Member

since 2008-05-13

Posts 31
Nebraska

1 posted 2008-05-16 12:17 PM

Hey girl.
Great poem i thought it rocked! any how i'm happy you posted this one. i'll see you soon.
love ya
Lea

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

2 posted 2008-05-16 08:33 PM

Nice poem.. I like it!!

~Zach~

"Fate leads the willing, and drags along the reluctant."

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

3 posted 2008-05-16 09:46 PM

nice write

wisdomofthesword
Member

since 2007-12-17

Posts 224
the last place on earth

4 posted 2008-05-18 02:17 AM

When ever i walk ur way
u always turn around

I know exactly how you feel when you say this. Nice write

I don't care if you think I'm a fool but don't ever tell me so

masksrlife
Member

since 2008-03-26

Posts 109
Canada

5 posted 2008-05-18 01:44 PM

I too know exacly how you feel, very will writtin.

*-crazycece-*

Just.Another.Falling.Star
Member

since 2008-05-08

Posts 422
Canada

6 posted 2008-05-23 06:25 PM

A different style of writing. I like it though, and it tends to be my life, kinda. Good poem though!

~*Julianna*~

"When life gives you lemons...alter their DNA and make SUPER LEMONS!!!"

Mexican Cutie
Junior Member

since 2008-05-14

Posts 18

7 posted 2008-05-24 12:48 PM

thanks for all ur encouragin words

Mexican~Cutie

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