Teen Poetry #8 |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
Never thought i'd fall for you thought all you were was fun but everytime you are around me i feel myself coming undone you were just another one night stand i told myself the next day but over and over i found myself remembering play by play i never expected you to call even though i waited by the phone and after a week or so i was ok with being alone But i never quite got over how i fell for a one night stand and how i memorized your movements as if it was the back of my hand never again will i do this i've got to be strong cos love is just a waste of time and its always time to move on. |
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Bahigano Junior Member
since 2008-05-13
Posts 31Nebraska |
Hey, I've never gone through that personally but my mom has she has a nack at having one night stands but in her last one she got prego. so yeah i kinda get it. It sucks but i really liked your poem. love Lea |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
ahh hunnie, i'm so sorry. Hope that all is better. -Kate <3 I live in a Bella world. only everyone is blindingly human . . . |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
I'm sorry. But you know love isn't a waste, you just have to be pateint. Good write by the way. "We all lead such elaborate lives, We don't know who's words are true." Aida |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Aw im sorry this has happen to you.. But Earl's right.. love isn't a waste of time just it hasn't happen to you quite yet.. hold on.. some guy out there is the right on efor you. ~Zach~ |
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Clockwork_Orange Senior Member
since 2007-03-23
Posts 620Space Camp, IN |
had lots of those...none like this, but i can sort of relate. very nice write. |
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Mexican Cutie Junior Member
since 2008-05-14
Posts 18 |
hey i really loved ur poem! Don't worry just be patient and u'll find mister right. Mexican~Cutie |
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