Let me see you one last time (A duet with the amazing "I am the arch angel")

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Let me see you one last time (A duet with the amazing "I am the arch angel")

Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

0 posted 2008-05-14 11:21 PM

Hey Guys. Just wanna say that Keagan is an amazing writer. I wouldn't be able to write this without his help.. Thanks!
And the funny thing about this poem is that neither of us knew what we were writing about the whole time writing this. lol! I had to add the last two stanza's just to make a story within this poem lol.
Anyway.. thats all im gunna say besides.. Enjoy, Hope you like it!

~Zach~

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Sneaking through the city streets without getting caught at all
Creepying through the cold, dead night making memories along the way
They keep moving...but seemed controlled like a puppet doll
Quicking up the pace. before the pastel colors of day.

People looking, people staring
Watching our every move, looking at us like we're from another place
Do you think they care, what they're wearing
Should even care on what we look or whats our race?

Forgetting who they are, who they know
Forgetting who they wish they'll never be.
All they can do is go on with their show
Like puppets on a string, never to be free

Great people is who they are.
Or who they think they should..
others just stay inside the car
Driving around as they normally would.

New ways of creating joy
Learning a new way to play
Finally something to enjoy
We’ll hurry now, on our way.. There in the distance the sunlight lays

Don’t breathe. Please stay..
Here we stay in our memory of us
Forever we shall lay
This isn’t just the feeling of love or simply lust

I wish to be here
Among the girl that I love
Water blue eyes.. watery like the end of the pier
Kiss me softly.. sweet like a turtle dove..

shattered-smiles
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since 2008-01-20

Posts 247
inside the shadows

1 posted 2008-05-14 11:35 PM

Wow, you guys do a great duet together! From all this info I already had on the poem from msn, it went together really well! Great job you two and I hope to hear more from you! We should do a trio one day!

TJ

So cut me into pieces and tape me into something beautiful...

hunnie_girl

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since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

2 posted 2008-05-15 04:21 AM

ummm lemme say this one thing...
WOWOWOWOW!!!! hehe awww this poem was soo sweet love this duet you two!!
Krysti

Bahigano
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since 2008-05-13

Posts 31
Nebraska

3 posted 2008-05-15 02:34 PM

You two. did awesome together. thats all i gotta say.
always
Lea

Earl Robertson
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since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

4 posted 2008-05-15 06:22 PM

I am in awe! Good Work!

"We all lead such elaborate lives, We don't know who's words are true." Aida

Just.Another.Falling.Star
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since 2008-05-08

Posts 422
Canada

5 posted 2008-10-13 08:16 PM

this is amazing. great work you two.

.:~]Julianna[~:.

"Somewhere under the rainbow...there will be thunderstorms."

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