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Teen Poetry #8

i hate pain

Bahigano
Junior Member

since 2008-05-13

Posts 31
Nebraska

0 posted 2008-05-14 04:15 PM

PAIN

The pain
To much to bear
I cry myself to sleep
Wishing I knew how to stop it
The pain is overwhelming
Hoping praying
That some day it will all go away
Why did it happen
Why did you leave
I no longer love
But cry and scream
Wishing for the pain to go away
I hate pain and I hate love
Because love is what caused this pain
The pain that won’t go away
Pain is all I feel now.

Bahigano
Junior Member

since 2008-05-13

Posts 31
Nebraska

1 posted 2008-05-14 04:17 PM

hey,
hopefully you guys like this. it was kinda spur of the moment. so if it isn't that good please tell me.
love always
LEA

Mexican Cutie
Junior Member

since 2008-05-14

Posts 18

2 posted 2008-05-15 08:37 AM

hey...Loved ur poem!!!
Mexican Cutie

sindhu
New Member

since 2008-05-12

Posts 2
karnataka, India

3 posted 2008-05-15 10:39 AM

hey nice job...
the lines
"I hate pain and I hate love
Because love is what caused this pain"

are awesome...good

Bahigano
Junior Member

since 2008-05-13

Posts 31
Nebraska

4 posted 2008-05-15 01:57 PM

Thanks for the encouraging words.
love
Lea

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