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Teen Poetry #8

my side of the wing

I am the arch angel
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since 2008-02-02

Posts 167
nowhere,illinois,USA

0 posted 2008-05-13 10:43 PM

She said don't
Just because you said so doesn't mean i won't
Clueless i am
The words you used hit me with a bam

Getting over you, I can't do it
My feelings for you are stuck in a pit
I miss chasing you through doors
Fresh touch,i miss yours

do you think i can see
what changes have happened to me
Like keeping distance away from them
Just like when i was with you when the lights were dim

Forget what we have for now
I'll guess i'll leave as i take a bow
Even if i love you,does it mean a thing?
Soon to find out,staying on my side of the wing.

earn your freedom of the charge of sacrificing your life for others

shattered-smiles
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since 2008-01-20

Posts 247
inside the shadows

1 posted 2008-05-13 11:00 PM

Good poem, but talk to her.

TJ

So cut me into pieces and tape me into something beautiful...

Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

2 posted 2008-05-14 07:34 AM

Keagan.. this poem.. im just speechless.. it sounded all good.. but the storyline was a little vague in the beginning.. but i understood it all towards the end.

~Zach~

"Fate leads the willing, and drags along the reluctant."

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