A Thousand Hearts Are Breaking

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Teen Poetry #8

A Thousand Hearts Are Breaking

Clockwork_Orange
Senior Member

since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

0 posted 2008-05-12 04:31 PM

a thousand hearts are breaking
as the rain fills in your lungs
drowning out who your are
and who you have become

lost inside yourself
this mirror tells no lies
i hate this play you act for us
from yourself you can not hide

five fingers crushing
into the soul of me
tugging at my heartstrings
my tears bleed through the seams

and now a thousand hearts are breaking
in the sadest song of life
i cant make you feel these words
but ill try with all my might

imsimplyme
Junior Member

since 2008-04-01

Posts 16
California

1 posted 2008-05-12 04:33 PM

great poem, how to read more from you

RevengeIsMine
Senior Member

since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

2 posted 2008-05-12 11:26 PM

A Thousand Hearts Are Breaking
And They're Breaking Just For You
The Talent Of The Tempest
The Talent we all crave too..

Okay so its lame and made up on the spot and it sucks.. but oh well.. this is the second time i've said this today.. you are one talented guy and i sure as hell know that you are destined for great things .. Just remeber who i am when you've finished changing the world lol..

Clockwork_Orange
Senior Member

since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

3 posted 2008-05-14 06:35 AM

not lame...talented.

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