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0 posted 2008-05-10 11:37 AM



Among the thunder clouds
Hear the subtle cries.
His tears of gold fall among your window pain.
He's no longer able to soar or fly

His feather remains gently; float above the world.
He was rejected from his holy grace.
Now to fall among the lightning and the clash.
Tears drip from his face.

Golden tears soak the ground
while the thunder rolls ahead
Lightning strikes the ground
His body feels like lead

Never to fly again.
wings torn well apart.
God rejected him
Left him with his black heart.

The storm is rageing
The wind tears the mortal life.
Tonight an angel fell.
Mortals can feel the strife.

Now the angel wonders
among the great oak trees
Only wanting one thing
To fly once again free.



© Copyright 2008 Zach Booker-Scott - All Rights Reserved
hiddensmiles
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1 posted 2008-05-10 12:21 PM


nice write

JJ

Earl Robertson
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2 posted 2008-05-10 12:38 PM


Beautiful and deep! If I read into this right I'm sorry, be better.

Library!

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XxForever.BrokenxX
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3 posted 2008-05-10 01:36 PM


A familiar feeling. Great write, horrible situation.


      {~~*~~}

{&]ebbing.away.from*my.pain.}}
{~Emily~}

therewegoagain
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4 posted 2008-05-15 10:45 PM


This is beautiful, really.

-i loved it.

PoetsPlay
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5 posted 2008-07-20 01:33 PM


This is a sad poem, but magnificent in its tears.

Alexandra

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6 posted 2008-07-21 12:21 PM


Stunning though very sad
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