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Teen Poetry #8

Don't cry fallen angel

Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

0 posted 2008-05-10 11:37 AM

Among the thunder clouds
Hear the subtle cries.
His tears of gold fall among your window pain.
He's no longer able to soar or fly

His feather remains gently; float above the world.
He was rejected from his holy grace.
Now to fall among the lightning and the clash.
Tears drip from his face.

Golden tears soak the ground
while the thunder rolls ahead
Lightning strikes the ground
His body feels like lead

Never to fly again.
wings torn well apart.
God rejected him
Left him with his black heart.

The storm is rageing
The wind tears the mortal life.
Tonight an angel fell.
Mortals can feel the strife.

Now the angel wonders
among the great oak trees
Only wanting one thing
To fly once again free.

hiddensmiles
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since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

1 posted 2008-05-10 12:21 PM

nice write

Earl Robertson
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since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

2 posted 2008-05-10 12:38 PM

Beautiful and deep! If I read into this right I'm sorry, be better.

Library!

"We all lead such elaborate lives, We don't know who's words are true." Aida

XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

3 posted 2008-05-10 01:36 PM

A familiar feeling. Great write, horrible situation.

{~~*~~}

{&]ebbing.away.from*my.pain.}}
{~Emily~}

therewegoagain
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since 2008-05-15

Posts 3

4 posted 2008-05-15 10:45 PM

This is beautiful, really.

-i loved it.

PoetsPlay
Member

since 2007-12-22

Posts 56
California

5 posted 2008-07-20 01:33 PM

This is a sad poem, but magnificent in its tears.

Alexandra

eternally_singing
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since 2007-12-18

Posts 123
PA, United States

6 posted 2008-07-21 12:21 PM

Stunning though very sad

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