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Teen Poetry #8

Still I Wait

Unfortunate Disaster
Junior Member

since 2008-05-08

Posts 17
Australia

0 posted 2008-05-08 01:53 PM

My insides are turning,
My soul is yearning,
My heart is sturring,
Still i wait.

My hands are shaking,
My mind is mistaking,
My heart is breaking,
Still i wait.

To share his place,
To touch his face,
For his warm embrace,
I'm still waiting.

For many years,
I'll shed no tears,
Though full of fears,
I'll still be waiting.

Romantic
Junior Member

since 2007-12-10

Posts 28
Lost in the eyes of the one i love

1 posted 2008-05-08 02:02 PM

This is another Beautiful poem. It flows Really well and whoever this is too is a very lucky person to have someone like you.

Unfortunate Disaster
Junior Member

since 2008-05-08

Posts 17
Australia

2 posted 2008-05-11 06:59 AM

Thank you. Your very kind.

pipgurl_95
New Member

since 2008-05-11

Posts 8
Michigan

3 posted 2008-05-11 02:21 PM

wow...i really like this one, its great!
Thanks for sharing!

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Tripp'ncutie
Member

since 2008-05-05

Posts 73
minnasota

4 posted 2008-05-12 08:56 AM

amazing i found it wonderfully written.

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